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The entire 40th ISC-Team would like to express its heartfelt thanks to the members of the Board of Trustees of the St. Gallen Foundation for International Studies and, in particular, its President, Dr. Josef Ackermann, for their support. Their resolute efforts on behalf of and personal commitment to our student initiative contributed decisively to the success of this year‘s St. Gallen Symposium. Particular the employees of the St. Gallen Foundation for International Studies have been unstinting in their support of the ISC.
The ISC has enjoyed the very generous hospitality of its alma mater, the University of St. Gallen ( HSG), since its inception, and we wish to express our particular thanks to all employees of the university, especially the Rector, Prof. Dr. Ernst Mohr, and the Administrative Director, Mr. Markus Br?nnimann. We were able to count on the generous and proactive support of the HSG, particularly against the background of the conversion work at the HSG which has had a massive effect on studies and the realisation of the St. Gallen Symposium in the last three years.
At this point（此時(shí)此刻）, the 40th ISC-Team also wants to express their sincere gratitude to their mentoring professor（指導(dǎo)教授）, Prof. Dr. Urs Fueglistaller, managing director of the swiss institute of small and medium-sized enterprises at the University of St. Gallen, for his great support of our work during the whole year.
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